Can you critique my work Design UX/UI [closed]

give me mistake if i'm wrong and give me what i must to change please

Login form enter image description here

Main form with no data to show (small rectangle center screen)

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Main form without side bar menu (hidden) enter image description here

Context menu for secondory actions ( like update delete ....etc)

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Invoice form enter image description here

Checkout Payement Form enter image description here

Form CRUD For some Objects enter image description here

This project is not finiched Just i want know if I am right or Not ?? Thank's for all constructive critical